短文改錯的教學設計

東亭中學 顧靜芳

教學目標：透過高三後階段 的專項複習，使學生在解題方法、技巧等方面有所提高，增強做改錯的信心，以求在做高考的第五大部分能夠得心應手，提高該部分的得分率。

教學方法：有易到難，有坡度，有層次，循序漸進，夾練夾析的互動，探究，任務型。

設計思路：從現象歸納到理論，到技巧、方法，到練習實踐。

學情分析：經過對一模，二模該部分的得分情況分析，學生在解此部分題，只憑感覺，不會分析，同時學生對改錯有畏難情緒，沒有信心。

動詞常見錯誤

1)時態不一致(And 等並列連詞前後動詞時態不一致)。

2)主謂不一致。

3)缺少謂語動詞（尤其缺be動詞）。

4)主動語態與被動語態錯用。

5)短語錯用。

6) 近義動詞錯用

Examples:

1We lost our way in the forest,what is worse, it began to rain.

2We lost our way in the forest,what is worse, it began to rain.

y it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.（NMET93）

time passed quickly. Evening came down.(NMET2002)

5. I was used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(NMET97)

fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.(NMET2002)

7. The librarian will let you know when the book you want has returned.(NMET94

the way, when you come, please take your sister here

非謂語動詞常見的錯誤

1）不定式

2）動名詞作主語、賓語

3）and 連接的不定式或動名詞前後一致（尤其距離較遠時） 4）現在分詞和過去分詞的區別等。

1. They will do all they can make sure that I get a good education

2. Play football makes us grow up tall and strong.(NMET1998

3. It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.

is hoped that all the world will pay attention to protect wild life. (NMET94)

t twenty people have passed the driving test,me including.(NMET95)

名詞，數詞的常見錯誤

1.單複數名詞錯用

2.形容詞錯用爲名詞，如： important-importance，different-difference，difficult---difficulty，interesting （interested）---interest，

4. 數詞錯用

1. We will get over the difficult we have building the bridge.

2. I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(NMET2001)

the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (NMET2002)

4. Two third of the students are from Europe.

形容詞、副詞的錯誤

1）修飾名詞用形容詞；

2）在系動詞後作表語用形容詞；

3）修飾實義動詞，形容詞，過去分詞及整個句子用副詞；

4）比較等級問題。

1. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(NMET96

they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(NMET98)

was about noon when we arrived

at the foot of the mountain. The three

of them were very excited.

介詞的錯誤

practise for three times every week.

2. On the dark night,the girl could find nobody to turn for help.

3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

冠詞的錯誤

1. Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher.(NMET2000)

may be one family and live under a same roof.(NMET2001)

2. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(NMET2002)

3. The food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET2002)

連詞.關係詞.句子結構及邏輯錯誤

1.…but it didn’t matter that I would win or not.(NMET2000)

I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf.(NMET2000)

3.…she was smiling but nodding at me.(NMET2000)

food was expensive and the service was good. (NMET2002)

5.I heard the news our school football team had won the match.

鞏固練習 . 單句

can’t consider him a honest man.

China,children usually start school at an age of seven.

le remember him for his contribution to the country.

ing is one thing; doing is other.

ones what you decide not to keep can be traded with other people.

the time when he was 15,he had become famous for his novel.

bad news made us feel sadly.

children learn to read and write, they play games as good.

told me the fact which the earth goes round the sun.

ng one’s hand can be accepted for crying for help.

is the very person that set the theater in fire.

far, he made a living by picking up wastes.

students watch the game burst into laughter.

church burned down yesterday date from the 18th century

are to 1992, the price of grain was increased about 50%

should stop the children from play fire.

a boy led the way,they started towards the village.

ever you do, and I’ll be right here waiting for you.

young man dressed in blue are my brother.

18. I told him the fact which the earth goes round the sun.

鞏固練習.綜合

解題技巧

1. No context, no text. 通讀全文，掌握大意;聯繫上下文;

2. 先易後難，正確的句子放在最後改;

3. 同一句子不能改動兩個地方（詞）;

4. 正確、規範使用批改符號。

Exercise :

Another problem is that good soil is gradual lost. 1_______

When trees is cut down,there is nothing to hold 2_______

the soil in the place on the hillside. So when it 3_______

rained,the soil is washed down the hills and into 4_______

the ng winds can also blow out the 5_______

valuable soil lies on the top of the fields. 6_______

Exercise :

If you take care notice in some places,you will 1________

see the fact most smokers are young people and even 2________

some are middle school is said that in 3________

China the number of the people smoked is about 4________

45%. Why is so many people smoke? Some think 5________

that smoking is pleasure,some believe that they 6________

can refresh them by smoking. In fact, smoking 7________

is a bad habit,that does great harm to people’s 8________

healthy. The study of smoking shows that many 9________

kinds of disease has something to do with smoking. 10______

小 結

做短文該錯應採取三個步驟

1.通讀短文，掌握大意

2.細讀全文，逐一作答

3.復讀全文，驗證答案