提高六級寫作的方法

1994.6

Directions:

For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: The Career I Pursue.

You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.

1994.1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic We Need to Broaden Our Knowledge.

You should write no less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 科學技術是社會發展所不可缺少的

2. 社會科學和自然科學相互滲透

3. 現代大學生需要廣博的知識

1993.6

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View On Opportunity. You must base your composition on the following instructions (give in Chinese):

有的人認爲機會是極少的，另一些人則認爲人人都會有某種機會。你的看法如何？

寫出你的理由並且適當舉例。在你的文章結尾處不要忘記寫出你的結論。

Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write it neatly.

1993.1

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Motorcycles And City Traffic. You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

1.近年來中國城市的摩托車

2.摩托車的優點和缺點

3.你對我國城市中摩托車發展的前景的看法

You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.

1992.6

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Looking Forward to the Twenty-First Century. Your composition should be based on your answer to the following question written in Chinese:

1.新世紀科技發展的前景如何？

2.新的科學技術會給社會帶來什麼好處？

3.新的科學技術會帶來什麼問題？

4.你怎樣對待新世紀的挑戰戰？

Your composition should be no less 120 words.

1992.1

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the following graph which shows the change in the number of film - goers and TV - watchers in a certain city. The title of the composition is: Film Is Giving Way to TV. You should write no less than 120 words for your composition and it must include the following ideas (given in Chinese):

1.電影觀衆越來越少

2.電視觀衆越來越多，因爲……

3.然而，還是有人喜歡看電影,因爲…….

Quote as few figures as possible. Remember to write your composition in readable handwriting.

1991.6

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the graph below.

The suggested Title is: Car Accidents Declining in Walton City. Remember that your composition

must be written according to the following outline:

and fall of the rate of car accidents as indicated by the graph;

ible reason(s) for the decline of car accidents in the city;

predictions of what will happen this year.

Your composition should be no less than 120 words and you should quote as few figures as

possible.

1991.1

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about Man Is to Survive. You should base your composition on the following outline:

1.人類面臨的問題（如能源，疾病，污染，人口等）

2.悲觀的看法（如人類將無法生存）

3.人類的智慧出路

Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Be sure to write your composition in readable handwriting.

1990.6

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities. Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You are supposed to write in favour of one suggestion (ONE only) and against another (ONE only). You should give your reasons in both cases. You should write no less than 120 words. Remember to give a short introduction and a brief conclusion. Write your composition clearly.

四種可能解決住房問題的方案：

1.多造高層建築

2.向地下發展

3.建造衛星城市

4.疏散城市人口

1990.1

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic according to the following OUTLINE. Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember that the contents of the OUTLINE should ALL be included in your composition. But you are not supposed to translate the OUTLINE word for word.

OUTLINE

問題：城市交通擁擠

解決方案（solution）

1.建造(lay down)更多道路

優點：(1) 降低街道擁擠程度

(2) 加速車流（flow of traffic）

缺點：佔地過多

2.開闢（open up）更多公共汽車線路

優點：減少自行車與小汽車

缺點：對部分人可能造成不方便

結論：兩者結合

2016六級寫作突破筆記(七)

題型分類 (Classification of every essay):

一、第一種題型（對比觀點選擇題；Essay I）:

(一)題型特點：

1、 大多爲三點提綱，提綱模式一般爲：有一些人……；還有人……；我的看法或觀點；

2、少數時候也會出現兩點提綱的情況，此時可以補充成三點提綱來寫作。

(二) 歷年真題：

2000.6； 1999.6； 1998.6； 1997.6； 1996.1；1995.6；1993.6； 1993.1

二、 第二種題型（社會熱點話題；Essay II）:

(一)題型特點：

1、 應該爲三點提綱，但是通常以兩點提綱出現的題目居多，所涉及主題爲當時社會熱點；

2、如果是兩點提綱，則補充成三點提綱寫作。

3、通常模式爲：現象概述--細節（原因、危害、方式等）--自我評論

(二)歷年真題：

2002.12； 2000.12； 2000.1； 1999.1； 1997.12； 1995.1；

三、第三種題型（圖標題；Report; Essay III）:

（一）題型特點：

1、 以圖表作爲資訊來源的寫作模式

2、通常模式爲：描述圖表--解釋原因--自我評論

（二）歷年真題：

2003.6; 2000.6； 1996.6； 1992.1； 1991.6

四、第四種題型（書信題； Essay IV）:

(一) 題型特點：

1、寫書信

（二）歷年真題：

2001.6； 2002.1；

五、第五種題型（諺語格言題； Essay V）:

(一) 題型特點：

1、文章題目爲一句格言或諺語

2、通常模式爲：解釋諺語--舉例論證--畫龍點睛

(二) 歷年真題：

1997.1；

1999.1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don't Hesitate to Say "No"

You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.別人請求幫助時，在什麼情況下我們說"不"。

2.爲什麼有些人在該說"不"的時候不說"不"。

3.該說"不"時不說"不"的壞處。

1998.6

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring Good Luck?

You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 有些人認爲某些數字會帶來好運。

2. 我認爲數字和運氣無關，……

1998.1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities.

You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given on Chinese) below:

1. 假冒僞劣商品的危害。

2. 怎樣杜絕假冒僞劣商品。

1997.6

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Job-Hopping

You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因爲…

2. 有些人喜歡經常更換工作，因爲…

3. 我的看法。

1997.1

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 爲什麼說"欲速則不達"。

2. 試舉例說明。

1996.6

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the grouphs below.

Heaalth Gains in Developing Countries

Life Expectancy Infant Mortality

1996.1

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Why I Take the College English Test Band 6, You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

1.有人認爲沒有必要參加大學英語六級考試

2.我參加CET－6考試的理由

You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.

1995.6

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Should Firecrackers Be Banned? You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

1.有人認爲放鞭炮是好事，爲什麼？

2.有人認爲放鞭炮是壞事，爲什麼？

3.我的看法

You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.

1995.1

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).

1.現在有些不良的商業廣告

2.這些廣告的副作用和危害性

3.我對這些廣告的態度

You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.

2016六級寫作突破筆記(三)

典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：四段比較好

（啓）Paragraph I：（1）引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點；可以用問句開頭How should people ……

（2）簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。

（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一種觀點或優點；

（2）本段的支援性分論點；

（3）本段總結（可以省略）。

（轉）Paragraph III：（1）承上啓下的過渡句；

（2）提出另一種觀點或缺點；

（3）本段的`支援性分論點

（4）本段總（可以省略）。

（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡兩種看法；

（2）給出自己的觀點。

④14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（啓）

注：1.第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）

注：1.本段總分總結構

argue that = they think that

the development of...

's more 遞進關係，moreover

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（轉）

注： 轉折詞

emphasize that = they think that

y's society is not what it was 現代社會今昔非比

4.許多知識 a wide range of/a large scope of/much；獲取知識 acquire/get knowledge

s nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 後者比前者更委婉

Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）

There is a lot to be said for both sides on the argument. But I hold the opinion that……

①11分

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.

注：1."people, who"應去掉逗號，改爲非限制定語從句。

suggest that = they think that

h 碰，閃光點詞彙，如教材P7：shoulder the responsibility of doing sth. 肩負起責任

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that "to know more, to read more". So they believe that reading extensively is better.

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.

實例二 99年6月真題

Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

Outline: 1.有人認爲讀書要有選擇

2.有人認爲應當博覽羣書

3.我的想法

①11分

When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that "to know more, to read more". So they believe that reading extensively is better.

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.

②5分

I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.

失分原因：分段太少，語法錯誤太多

③2分

Most people thought that read books should have been selective. But others believed reading extensively was correction.

Selective books or reading extensively?

Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,

on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for us.

On another hand. Someone's interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn't reading at only one level.

I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.

As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don't treat these books with reckless abandon.

The best technology of reading is connect.

失分原因：分段太多，語法錯誤太多

④14分

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.

⑤8分

Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.

Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.

It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.

失分原因：結構失調，表述方式單一

寫作原則

內容簡單化

結構模式化（主題句-分論點-總結）

語言要包裝

錯誤要回避

萬能理由 (Omnipotence)：

1、方便：convenient/convenience

2、效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency

3、節省和浪費：save time/money/space; economical, thrift

waste time/money/space; costly, lavish

4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,

considerate, confident, creative, sociable,

perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative

5、人的身體健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic

6、娛樂：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax

tired, boring, lonely

7、環境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty

8、安全和危險：safe, danger, risk

9、經驗：experience, social experience, enter the society

10、人際：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely

基本表達(Basic Elements of English Writing)：

越來越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of

人們認爲：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that

許多問題：a host of/a number of problems

引起人們注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.

意識到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to the fact/danger

適應新的形勢/變化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change

接觸各種思想/經歷：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems

接觸社會：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society

獲得成功：achieve/accomplish success

提出觀點/建議：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions

作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)

影響學習/工作：interfere with studies/work

產生影響：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on

較好地駕馭生活：be a better pilot of one's life

剝奪機會/權力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity

取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way

採取措施：take effective steps/measures to

控制我們的環境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment

躲避危險/挑戰：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge

滿足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of

補償損失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage

解釋某現象：account for/explain the phenomenon

對……很好的瞭解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into

把某因素考慮進去：take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to

品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth

培養對……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in

經歷變化/困難/艱險：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience

表現出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image

生活充滿不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice

追求學習/職業：pursue one's academic interest/professional career

學習知識/技術：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill

被看作學習的……榜樣：be held up as a good example

交流經驗/知識：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge

發揮/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great) role/part

逃學/缺課：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture

知識/經驗豐富：rich in knowledge/experience

確立/追求目標：set/pursue a goal/higher standard

到達目標：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective

克服困難：overcome obstacles/difficulty

面臨危險/困難：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty

阻礙了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth

阻礙了發展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of

持傳統的看法：hold conventional wisdom

發表看法：voice/express one's opinion

持相反/合理的觀點：take the opposite/fresh view

揭穿某種一貫的說法：shatter the myth of

求得幫助：enlist one's support/help

縮小差別：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country)

把成功/錯誤歸咎於：attribute/own the success/failure to

對……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to

施加壓力：put/exert a academic pressure on

重視：assign/attach much importance/significance to

強調：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on

把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon

提供機會/資訊：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.

抓住機會：grab/seize/take the opportunity

得到機會：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information

有可能：there is (little/much) possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that

展開競爭：compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of

開展運動：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage) a (vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising) campaign (for/against)

對我很有/沒有什麼意義：make much/little sense to me

帶來無窮的幸福/滿足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint

獻身於：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career

大不（沒什麼）兩樣：make much(little/no) difference

真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …

改變生活旅程：change/alter the course of life

建立在大量的學習/實踐上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice

進行調查/執行任務：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment

辭去工作/學習：leave/quit one's job/work/school

參加考試/競賽等：enter (for) the examination/contest, race

參加活動/討論：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion

影響思想/態度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude

進入大學/社會/家庭/勞力市場/職業：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals

實現自己的理想/願望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)

減輕壓力/緊張：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension

提高社會地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership

提高技術/能力：sharpen (increase/improve/enhance/boost) one's skill/ability

加快/促進發展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of

隨着生活節奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society

開闊眼界/興趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge) one's mental horizons

有助於瞭解/發展/宣傳/解決：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of

有助於解決問題：go a long way to(towards) solving the problem

迷戀名利/分數：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune

把時間花/浪費在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.

利用機會/技術：make (full/better) use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent

把知識/經驗運用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use

取得進步：make much progress/strides/gains in

充分發揮潛力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability

充滿激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion for