雅思寫作基礎
小編寄語:定語從句是雅思比較熟悉也是作文中出現最多的一種語法結構,甚至有的作文中只有簡單句和定語從句兩種句型,但是大家都這麼寫或作文中出現不止三次定語從句的話,會導致句型單一。那今天我們就來說下如何變身這些定語從句。
定語從句綜述:
在雅思寫作這種半書面英語中,定語從句既可以修飾一個名詞或部分代詞,也可以修飾其前面整句話(這個時候定語從句謂語從句必須是單數哦,而且引導詞必須是“,which”)。
比如:Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically. 任何鼓勵外語學習的事情有利於社會的文化和經濟發展。這句話中的which 修飾不定代詞anything。
再如:children spend much time watching TV,which gives rises to many health problems like obesity and poor eyesight.小孩花大量時間看電視,這樣會引起很多健康問題,比如肥胖症以及視力下降。這裏的which就在修飾其面整句話(children spend much time watching TV.)
改造定語從句的3大方法:
但是這樣的句子在大部分的學員作文中出現的比較多,那怎麼樣讓屌絲定語從句逆襲呢。其實有多種方法,今天我們先介紹大家容易掌握的3個方法。
1:如果定語從句修飾名詞,而且定語從句的謂語動詞是be動詞,也就是N 關係代詞BE 形式,這個時候我們可以把關係代詞+be動詞省略
比如:
A vast majority of people who are invited to the party are well-known scientists.
我們就可以把who are省略,改爲:A vast majority of people invited to the party are well-known scientists.
這樣我們就把原來普通的'定語從句做定語改爲了過去分詞(非謂語結構的一種)做定語,而分詞在書面英語中是一種常用而且比較書面的語法結構,所以建議想考6分以上的烤鴨們多多使用。
Employees who are from rural areas will confronted with many problems in major cities.(定語從句做定語)
Employees from rural areas will confronted with many problems in major cities.(介詞短語做定語)
The number of students who cannot attend university is decreasing.
The number of students who are unable to have access to tertiary education is decreasing.
The number of students unable to have access to tertiary education is decreasing.(形容詞短語做後置定語)
再比如:
Television which has been as one of the most fascinating inventions in the 20th century is now penetrating into every family.
Television, one of the most fascinating inventions in the 20th century, is now penetrating into every family.(同位語)
所以當作文中有多出類似的定語從句時,我們可以省略關係代詞be動詞或者把實意動詞轉化爲be動詞之後再省略,這樣作文中就可以出現其他語法結構做定語,例如非謂語結構,介詞短語,形容詞短語,或同位語,而不單單是定語從句。那這樣句型是不是就多樣化了呢?
2:如果出現“名詞關係代詞實意動詞”,這個時候我們可以替換爲:n doing sth 形式。
比如:
Education, which helps children develop their thinking and accumulate their knowledge , is a deciding factor of one's success.
Education,helping children develop their thinking and accumulate their knowledge , is a deciding factor of one's success.
We told them they were the victims who deserved sympathy the most.
We told them they were the victims deserving sympathy the most
3:如果作文中出現了“,which”修飾其前面整句話的時候怎麼改呢?
A-非謂語結構做狀語: SVO, (thus)doing sth
B-概括性同位語: SVO,a/an 概括性名詞that SVO
比如剛纔提到的例句:
children spend much time watching TV,which gives rises to many health problems like obesity and poor eyesight.
children spend much time watching TV, giving rises to many health problems like obesity and poor eyesight.
children spend much time watching TV,a bad habit that gives rises to many health problems like obesity and poor eyesight.
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